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		<published>2008-11-07T18:37:44Z</published>
		<updated>2008-11-07T18:08:57Z</updated>
		<title><![CDATA[Because it&apos;s Friday]]></title>
		<summary>I really couldn&apos;t pick anything else. This is Cornelius Eady&apos;s sprawlingly beautiful Victims of the Latest Dance Craze. Eady is one of my favorite poets. You can read a mediocre feature I wrote on him when I was 22. Damn,...</summary>
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			<![CDATA[I really couldn't pick anything else. This is Cornelius Eady's sprawlingly beautiful <a href="http://www.poetryfoundation.org/archive/poem.html?id=177993">Victims of the Latest Dance Craze</a>. Eady is one of my favorite poets. You can read a <a href="http://www.washingtoncitypaper.com/display.php?id=11837">mediocre feature</a> I wrote on him when I was 22. Damn, so long ago. Anyway, if I can find it, I'll post another favorite of mine by Eady--"Jack Johnson Does The Eagle Rock." It's a play on the Titanic and racism. But to the poem at hand. As always, comments are closed till this afternoon. We can talk then. Follow the jump to read it.<br /><b><br />UPDATE:</b> Comments open guys. It's funny I was reading this this morning wondering if it was too sentimental. Then I hit this lovely stanza:<br /><blockquote><br /><div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">In the next room
</div><div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Their mother throws her dress away to chance. 
</div><div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">It drops to the floor
</div><div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Like a brush sighs across a drum head,
</div><div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">And when she takes her lover,
</div><div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">What are they thinking of
</div><div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">If not a ballroom filled with mirrors,
</div><div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">A world where no one has the right
</div><div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">To stumble?</div></blockquote>

<br />Truly gorgeous. Though I still don't know what this piece is about. Maybe it's just a version of Ice Cube's "It Was A Good Day," put on paper...<br /><br /><div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy"><br /></div>]]>
			<![CDATA[Victims of the Latest Dance Craze<br /><br /><br />



<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">The streamers choking the main arteries
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Of downtown.
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">The brass band led by a child
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">From the home for the handicapped. 
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">The old men
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Showing their hair (what's left of it), 
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">The buttons of their shirts Popping in time
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">To the salsa flooding out
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Of their portable headphones,
</div>
<br />
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">And mothers letting their babies 
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Be held by strangers.
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">And the bus drivers
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Taping over their fare boxes 
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">And willing to give directions.
</div>
<br />
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Is there any reason to mention 
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">All the drinks are on the house? 
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Thick, adolescent boys
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Dismantle their BB guns.
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Here is the world (what's left of it), 
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">In brilliant motion,
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">The oil slick at the curb
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Danced into a thousand
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Splintered steps.
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">The bag ladies toss off their
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Garments
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">To reveal wings.
</div>
<br />
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">"This dance you do," drawls the cop, 
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">"What do you call it?"
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">We call it scalding the air.
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">We call it dying with your
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Shoes on.
</div>
<br />
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">And across the street 
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">The bodies of tramps 
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Stumble
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">In a sober language.
</div>
<br />
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">And across the street
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Shy young girls step behind 
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Their nameless boyfriends, 
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Twirling their skirts.
</div>
<br />
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">And under an archway
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">A delivery boy discovers
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">His body has learned to speak, 
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">And what does this street look like 
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">If not a runway,
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">A polished wood floor?
</div>
<br />
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">From the air,
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Insects drawn by the sweat 
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Alight, when possible,
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">On the blur
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Of torsos.
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">It is the ride
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Of their tiny lives.
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">The wind that burns their wings, 
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">The heaving, oblivious flesh, 
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Mountains stuffed with panic, 
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">An ocean
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">That can't make up its mind. 
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">They drop away
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">With the scorched taste
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Of vertigo.
</div>
<br />
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">And under a swinging light bulb
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Some children 
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Invent a game
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">With the shadow the bulb makes,
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">And the beat of their hearts.
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">They call it dust in the mouth.
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">They call it horse with no rider.
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">They call it school with empty books.
</div>
<br />
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">In the next room
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Their mother throws her dress away to chance. 
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">It drops to the floor
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Like a brush sighs across a drum head,
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">And when she takes her lover,
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">What are they thinking of
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">If not a ballroom filled with mirrors,
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">A world where no one has the right
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">To stumble?
</div>
<br />
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">In a parking lot
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">An old man says this:
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">"I am a ghost dance.
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">I remember the way my hair felt, 
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Damp with sweat and wind.
</div>
<br />
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">When the wind kisses the leaves, I am dancing. 
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">When the subway hits the third rail, I am dancing. 
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">When the barrel goes over Niagara Falls, I am dancing.
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Music rings my bones like metal.
</div>
<br />
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">O, Jazz has come from heaven," he says,
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">And at the z he jumps, arcing his back like a heron's neck, 
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">And stands suddenly revealed
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">As a balance demon,
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">A home for
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Stetson hats.
</div>
<br />
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">We have all caught the itch:
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">The neon artist
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Wiring up his legs, 
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">The tourist couple 
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Recording the twist on their
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Instamatic camera, 
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">And in a factory,
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">A janitor asks his broom
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">For a waltz,
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">And he grasps it like a woman
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">He'd have to live another
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Life to meet,
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">And he spins around the dust bin
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">And machines and thinks:
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy"><i>Is everybody happy?</i>
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">And he spins out the side door,
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Avoiding the cracks in the sidewalk,
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">Grinning as if he'd just received
</div>
<div style="text-indent: -1em; padding-left: 1em;" class="bodycopy">The deepest kiss in the world.</div>]]>
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		<title>Comment from Kevin McNamara on 2008-11-07</title>
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				<name>Kevin McNamara</name>
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				<![CDATA[<p>Thanks for that one.  Really, really, fine.</p>]]>
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		<published>2008-11-07T18:33:31Z</published>
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		<title>Comment from BelleIsa on 2008-11-07</title>
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				<name>BelleIsa</name>
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				<![CDATA[<p>I'm not sure what this poem is about either, and to calm my frustration I decided that the "what" doesn't matter. </p>

<p>It's the scenes, which can stand alone, which infact do, that make this poem sentimental, stark, angry, ironic and funny. It's the moments that matter.</p>

<p>Like the stanza about the flies that end up "With the scorched taste/Of vertigo." Or the <br />
janitor dancing with his broom "...like a woman/ He'd have to live another/ Life to meet." I also liked the cop as the outsider.</p>

<p>I can't figure out how the title connects to the text--not that it has to. I'd just like to be able to make the connection.</p>]]>
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		<published>2008-11-07T18:37:28Z</published>
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		<title>Comment from Dan S. on 2008-11-07</title>
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				<name>Dan S.</name>
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				<![CDATA[<p>Same sentiments as BelleIsa. I've never been much of a poetry buff (aside from Edgar Allen Poe, and the real notables), so I'm no expert when it comes to overall meaning. But I always enjoy the singular images and scenes that the words bring to mind, and this poem has many good ones.</p>]]>
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		<published>2008-11-07T18:47:54Z</published>
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		<title>Comment from DougEMI on 2008-11-07</title>
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				<name>DougEMI</name>
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				<![CDATA[<p><b>  Or the <br />
janitor dancing with his broom "...like a woman/ He'd have to live another/ Life to meet."   </b></p>

<p>I too was struck by these lines.  It evokes a large amount of sadness to read that because he will be forever lonely,  but he seems to be getting such joy from the act.  </p>]]>
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		<published>2008-11-07T18:53:58Z</published>
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		<title>Comment from Laura on 2008-11-07</title>
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				<name>Laura</name>
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				<![CDATA[<p>Seems to me that this is all about transcending the everyday world.  That said, I was really struck by the stanza about the children and their game, especially </p>

<p>They call it dust in the mouth.<br />
They call it horse with no rider.<br />
They call it school with empty books. </p>

<p>Funny how all the grownups dream about something beautiful and better than what's around them, while the children have imagined something dark (and, to me, heartbreaking).</p>

<p>I'm so glad you're doing this, TNC.  Friday poetry day kicks your blog from the interesting and compelling into the sublime.</p>]]>
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		<published>2008-11-07T19:05:23Z</published>
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		<title>Comment from Aaron on 2008-11-07</title>
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				<name>Aaron</name>
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				<![CDATA[<p>I liked this part:</p>

<p>Here is the world (what's left of it),<br />
In brilliant motion,<br />
The oil slick at the curb<br />
Danced into a thousand<br />
Splintered steps. </p>

<p>I can't tell if it's mournful or hopeful. But that's what I love about poetry. Thanks for this one.</p>]]>
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		<published>2008-11-07T19:10:13Z</published>
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		<title>Comment from Gramsci on 2008-11-07</title>
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				<name>Gramsci</name>
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				<![CDATA[<p>If anything dates 1992 Ice Cube, it's how this win was never even dreamed of by him in the song.  I guess Pharcyde came the closest, promising to change the "flucture of the money."<br />
</p>]]>
		</content>
		<published>2008-11-07T19:15:16Z</published>
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		<id>tag:ta-nehisicoates.theatlantic.com,2008://31.57595-comment:139362</id>

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		<title>Comment from Gramsci on 2008-11-07</title>
		<author>
				<name>Gramsci</name>
				<uri></uri>
		</author>
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				<![CDATA[<p>And, in case my first post didn't go through, David Stern is responsible for anachronizing one of the best metered phrases in early 90's hip-hop: "The Lakers beat the SuperSonics."</p>]]>
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		<published>2008-11-07T19:17:23Z</published>
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		<id>tag:ta-nehisicoates.theatlantic.com,2008://31.57595-comment:139366</id>

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		<title>Comment from Juniper on 2008-11-07</title>
		<author>
				<name>Juniper</name>
				<uri></uri>
		</author>
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				<![CDATA[<p>I love love love the repetition of the parenthetical "what's left of it." Wry and sad and deceptively offhand.</p>]]>
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		<published>2008-11-07T19:19:11Z</published>
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		<id>tag:ta-nehisicoates.theatlantic.com,2008://31.57595-comment:139379</id>

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		<title>Comment from Katai on 2008-11-07</title>
		<author>
				<name>Katai</name>
				<uri>http://lindsaykatai.com</uri>
		</author>
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				<![CDATA[<p>I think this line is telling:</p>

<p><i>Is there any reason to mention <br />
All the drinks are on the house?</i></p>

<p>I think BelleIsa is right - the what doesn't matter.</p>

<p>But here are two thoughts:<br />
1. Everyone rejoicing an apocalypse?  There seemed to be many images of death in there.  This in particular made me think of an apocalypse:</p>

<p><i>The wind that burns their wings, <br />
The heaving, oblivious flesh, <br />
Mountains stuffed with panic, <br />
An ocean <br />
That can’t make up its mind.</i></p>

<p>This too:</p>

<p><i>O, Jazz has come from heaven,” he says, <br />
And at the z he jumps, arcing his back like a heron’s neck</i></p>

<p>If the world is broken, perhaps an approaching end would bring everyone together and cause us to dance to the music of our own demise.</p>

<p>2. I know it's impossible, but the widespread joy when Obama was announced the winner?  A broken country, still hurting, but celebrating?  That's definitely an interpretation that jumped out at me, but then again, I'm going to have Obama on the brain for weeks to come.</p>]]>
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		<published>2008-11-07T20:00:55Z</published>
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		<id>tag:ta-nehisicoates.theatlantic.com,2008://31.57595-comment:139406</id>

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		<title>Comment from Ta-Nehisi Coates on 2008-11-07</title>
		<author>
				<name>Ta-Nehisi Coates</name>
				<uri>http://www.ta-nehisi.com</uri>
		</author>
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				<![CDATA[<p>I am going to agree on the end of the world theory. Perhaps there's a reason the children's imagery is so dark. Hmmm maybe not the best day for this poem...</p>]]>
		</content>
		<published>2008-11-07T20:28:31Z</published>
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		<id>tag:ta-nehisicoates.theatlantic.com,2008://31.57595-comment:139417</id>

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		<title>Comment from Chris L. on 2008-11-07</title>
		<author>
				<name>Chris L.</name>
				<uri>http://chrislombardi.wordpress.com</uri>
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				<![CDATA[<p>Like all the best poems, this one's meaning just crawls around the back of your head, resisting translation (otherwise, why <a> tell it slant?</a>) </p>

<p>This one  makes me think a little about NYC on 9/11, when rage, dance and tears kind of blended into each other. Eady was teaching at City College that year, and deep in work on his Brutal Imagination cycle; the piece feels looser, and more rigorous at the same time.  </p>

<p>Thanks for the Friday gift. I haven't turned to Eady in way too long.</p>]]>
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		<published>2008-11-07T20:41:33Z</published>
	</entry>

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		<id>tag:ta-nehisicoates.theatlantic.com,2008://31.57595-comment:139425</id>

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		<title>Comment from thatgirl on 2008-11-07</title>
		<author>
				<name>thatgirl</name>
				<uri>http://clevelandlove.blogspot.com</uri>
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				<![CDATA[<p>This has been the worst day ever until I read that. For some reason it just put me in a better place than where I was. </p>

<p>Thank you so much.</p>]]>
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		<published>2008-11-07T20:49:44Z</published>
	</entry>

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		<id>tag:ta-nehisicoates.theatlantic.com,2008://31.57595-comment:139430</id>

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		<title>Comment from Keith on 2008-11-07</title>
		<author>
				<name>Keith</name>
				<uri></uri>
		</author>
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				<![CDATA[<p>Personal story, I had the honor to meet Cornelius about ten years ago. He signed my copy of "You Don't Miss Your Water" with "Those who buy poetry are the true heroes of the world. Thanks."</p>

<p>Anyway, "Dance Craze" is one of my favorite poems too, and I think it's rather appropriate at this moment. Don't get down on the "end of the world" stuff. This poem is about joy in the face of doom. And if that doesn't explain the weather of the country right now after eight, long, dark years, I don't know what does. The symmetry with the pictures from Tuesday night exemplify the true power of leaping imagery to makes sense of the world.</p>

<p>Thanks, Ta-Nehisi.</p>]]>
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		<published>2008-11-07T20:55:16Z</published>
	</entry>

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		<id>tag:ta-nehisicoates.theatlantic.com,2008://31.57595-comment:139455</id>

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		<title>Comment from nolo on 2008-11-07</title>
		<author>
				<name>nolo</name>
				<uri></uri>
		</author>
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				<![CDATA[<p>Some reviewer once asked what Dylan Thomas's poem <a href="http://www.cs.rice.edu/~ssiyer/minstrels/poems/405.html" rel="nofollow">"Altarwise by Owl-Light"</a> meant, and Thomas responded by remarking that no one ever asks what Bach's fugues mean.  Which is something to think about.</p>]]>
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		<published>2008-11-07T21:39:32Z</published>
	</entry>

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		<id>tag:ta-nehisicoates.theatlantic.com,2008://31.57595-comment:139470</id>

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		<title>Comment from shanilink on 2008-11-07</title>
		<author>
				<name>shanilink</name>
				<uri></uri>
		</author>
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				<![CDATA[<p>Very interesing pick. But I was also looking forward to the hiphop entry today, no more 2fers?</p>]]>
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		<published>2008-11-07T22:28:20Z</published>
	</entry>

	<entry>
		<id>tag:ta-nehisicoates.theatlantic.com,2008://31.57595-comment:139484</id>

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		<title>Comment from Katai on 2008-11-07</title>
		<author>
				<name>Katai</name>
				<uri></uri>
		</author>
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				<![CDATA[<p>Nah, I think its darkness is what makes all the dancing so gorgeous to behold.  And hey, every end is a beginning, blah blah blah cliche blah.</p>]]>
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		<published>2008-11-07T23:27:41Z</published>
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		<id>tag:ta-nehisicoates.theatlantic.com,2008://31.57595-comment:139520</id>

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		<title>Comment from Zoe on 2008-11-07</title>
		<author>
				<name>Zoe</name>
				<uri></uri>
		</author>
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				<![CDATA[<p>This poem rocks.  Thank you so much for posting it.</p>

<p>It's about joyful dance during the end of the world - but not any end in particular; the world is always ending (considering that every second is new and brings us closer to death.)</p>

<p>Wow, I am going to be rereading this for a while.  Thank you.</p>]]>
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		<published>2008-11-08T01:10:44Z</published>
	</entry>

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		<id>tag:ta-nehisicoates.theatlantic.com,2008://31.57595-comment:139536</id>

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		<title>Comment from Ta-Nehisi Coates on 2008-11-07</title>
		<author>
				<name>Ta-Nehisi Coates</name>
				<uri>http://www.ta-nehisi.com</uri>
		</author>
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				<![CDATA[<p>Shani,</p>

<p>We'll do some hip-hop on Monday or Tuesday.</p>]]>
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		<published>2008-11-08T03:16:49Z</published>
	</entry>

	<entry>
		<id>tag:ta-nehisicoates.theatlantic.com,2008://31.57595-comment:139537</id>

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		<title>Comment from Gramsci on 2008-11-07</title>
		<author>
				<name>Gramsci</name>
				<uri></uri>
		</author>
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				<![CDATA[<p>It reminds me of Abbie Hoffman's "we'd have one hell of a revolution that's what" speech. But in a minor key.</p>]]>
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		<published>2008-11-08T03:16:52Z</published>
	</entry>

	<entry>
		<id>tag:ta-nehisicoates.theatlantic.com,2008://31.57595-comment:139556</id>

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		<title>Comment from zackboston on 2008-11-08</title>
		<author>
				<name>zackboston</name>
				<uri></uri>
		</author>
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				<![CDATA[<p>I have loved Cornelius Eady's poems because he understands a process that I think is essential for our souls to learn right now --- how to reconcile paradoxes, how to have two opposite feelings, beliefs or ideas inside you and not choose between the two, but know that both are true and neither can be true without the other.  </p>

<p>To be unflinchingly honest about the fact that the opposites exist, that both are true, that you don't understand.  To have the courage and patience to hold that paradox inside you until the mind in your heart lives into understanding, lives into comprehending how they are not really different.  And how impossible and shattering that moment of comprehending is.  To break the chains of rationalism that hold us back from becoming truly human. </p>

<p>I was first generation college and like many came out of a home filled with wretching and multiple forms of pain tied to what my family experienced as immigrants and their helplessness turned to rage in the face of that.  I took solace in mathematics because unlike my life, in mathematics you could describe a problem and actually solve the problem and there was a right answer and a wrong answer.  </p>

<p>That was a comfort to me until I faced a course in complex variables where you worked in a space that involved numbers that were the square root of -1 --- some people call it "imaginary numbers."  In this space, there were no lines, only circles.  I always experienced math on an emotional and spiritual level.  So this was a crisis of the spirit for me.  What happens when the poles disappear --- when there is no right and no wrong for instance?  I took that class three times and got the highest grade in the class until we came to that proof and then I abruptly dropped out. It looked like I would never graduate with my engineering degree becasue of this class. </p>

<p>And in one of those interventions that change your life, someone explained to me about reconciling paradoxes and got me to work with that in my life. To strive to imagine how the pain of my life could be unspeakable but also be the greatest gift and source of joy in my life. I used to have a spoken word poem on my wall over my desk that had this tremendous image of a broken woman who is faced with a broken high voltage wire and she takes one end in each hand and becomes the conduit of power.  That's how the work of reconciling opposites felt to me, but it also healed me enough to function in this world.</p>

<p>So yes, Cornelius Eady in this poem is talking about the courageous experience of joy in the face of sorrow.  My favorite line is "his body has learned to speak."  Sometimes our minds are so messed up that the joy just has to flow through our bodies and speak of its possibility and healing despite all that we are up against.<br />
</p>]]>
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		<published>2008-11-08T13:01:10Z</published>
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		<id>tag:ta-nehisicoates.theatlantic.com,2008://31.57595-comment:139565</id>

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		<title>Comment from zackboston on 2008-11-08</title>
		<author>
				<name>zackboston</name>
				<uri></uri>
		</author>
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				<![CDATA[<p>Here's another Cornelius Eady poem that I love.  Not quite sure why.  But it has stuck with me for years and years. . . and I thought of it again after reading Ta Nehisi's book reflecting on his father. . . </p>

<p>TOO YOUNG TO KNOW</p>

<p>One day, my father chopped down<br />
The old apricot tree<br />
Which used to live in my parents backyard.<br />
My father deflected my anger at him<br />
With a look I heard Muddy Waters sing:<br />
"Y'all too young to know."</p>

<p>When I went to my mother<br />
For the truth,<br />
I only heard<br />
What he must have told her:<br />
A vague story about roots <br />
   and basement pipes,<br />
A vague story about branches<br />
   and kitchen windows,<br />
Punctuated by a shrug which meant:<br />
"He just does what he does."</p>

<p>The blues don't know nothing about trees<br />
Unless, of course,<br />
It's enlisted the moon<br />
To drag some shadows around,<br />
Unless, of course,<br />
Something jumps up <br />
Out of a hollow log,<br />
A worry you didn't need<br />
To cross your path.</p>

<p>My father's gone,<br />
The tree's a stump,<br />
And I'm still too young to know<br />
If one day, I'll glance<br />
   out my window<br />
At the sycamore,<br />
And cluck my teeth.</p>

<p><br />
There is power in knowing that you get both strength and vulnerability from the ancestors.  There is power in knowing that you do not know and that there are things you can't explain.<br />
</p>]]>
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		<published>2008-11-08T14:56:37Z</published>
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		<id>tag:ta-nehisicoates.theatlantic.com,2008://31.57595-comment:139597</id>

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		<title>Comment from Ramdu on 2008-11-08</title>
		<author>
				<name>Ramdu</name>
				<uri></uri>
		</author>
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				<![CDATA[<p>Wow, Zack. That's an amazing meditation on paradox and your life. Thanks for that.</p>]]>
		</content>
		<published>2008-11-08T18:20:13Z</published>
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		<id>tag:ta-nehisicoates.theatlantic.com,2008://31.57595-comment:139622</id>

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		<title>Comment from lebecka on 2008-11-08</title>
		<author>
				<name>lebecka</name>
				<uri></uri>
		</author>
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				<![CDATA[<p>Wow, TNC, this is sentimental the way Gabriel Garcia Marquez is sentimental. <br />
Don't fall for children and dancing as being sentimental. Remember that at the end of the flamenco is always the dagger. And children are the least sentimental of beings.</p>]]>
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		<published>2008-11-08T21:28:55Z</published>
	</entry>

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		<id>tag:ta-nehisicoates.theatlantic.com,2008://31.57595-comment:139661</id>

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		<title>Comment from s on 2008-11-08</title>
		<author>
				<name>s</name>
				<uri></uri>
		</author>
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				<![CDATA[<p>"This dance you do," drawls the cop,<br />
"What do you call it?"<br />
We call it scalding the air.<br />
We call it dying with your<br />
Shoes on.</p>

<p>perfect</p>]]>
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		<published>2008-11-09T02:00:35Z</published>
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		<title>Comment from Mr. Shrimp on 2008-11-10</title>
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				<name>Mr. Shrimp</name>
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				<![CDATA[<p>I'm late on this, I know. The use of the phrase "Ghost Dance" in the poem makes me think of the Ghost Dance that swept Native American tribes in the late 1800s, as any hope they had of maintaining something of their life in the face of genocidal westward expansion was vanishing. It was an apocalyptic ritual, invented when the ghosts far outnumbered the living, dancing in the face of death and despair. In Dee Brown's "Bury My Heart at Wounded Knee," he makes the argument that the massacre of Ghost Dancers at Wounded Knee in 1890 was the final symbolic defeat, a kind of spiritual murder.</p>

<p>All that said, I'm sure in the dancing itself, the Ghost Dance was joyful, even if the motivation was death and destruction and despair.</p>

<p>It seems in the poem the dance craze is similar, only we don't know "the what," i.e., the motivation for the craze. The sadness/death precipitating the dance is not identified, but is palpable in every move. </p>

<p>Thanks, TNC. An amazing poem and one I had never read before.</p>]]>
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		<published>2008-11-10T15:52:18Z</published>
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